Today, wake up, have a cinnamon raisin toasted bagel with creamy cream cheese and do oil painting for five hours. This my before and After progress I did today.
I would say that it does look a lot better than last time. Maybe ramping about somethings bring more clarity into your work. I am much happier with the background because it isn't as shining bright orange and expresses more abstraction. Replicating a pastel medium is not the easiest, especially when you don't know how to use the paints very well.